I'm a fool on guitars, in general the other instruments save my ass, but this one isn't that bad and is driven more by guitar than bass (not as normally). PS: I was 12 days away and nobody posted something here ...strange. ^_^
Sounds better now, and it's a minute longer. Now there is an interlude section, maybe with room for a little guitar-solo from bar 101 to 112 or 120. That's the hardest thing for me, I'm not into guitars really.. You wanna write for me..? ;-) @ reanimator: and yes, that's exactly what I meant, some guitar parts in the song should be more challenging.
new song done, a good one, for a band I never will have...sigh. Would be fun to play, even there could be some changes. But there's always something to change or to exchange (lacking guitar-riffs). Now I'm happy as it is, for a while.. ;-)
My first elaborated song since a half year. Nice to see and hear from the community again. A lot of new guys here.. The song is almost complete, just working on details. Maybe a longer bridge with solo is needed to make it longer. Any other suggestions?
The song title says it all. I hope I've done good lyrics to it. A happy little accident happend while completing them: At the end the sentence "fly of this ledge like a fether" was meant to insinuate a contemplation of suicide by a broken-hearted. Just this minute I realized that it all can be turned upside down if you understand the protagonist as a murder letting someone else fall (dead or alive). That's great, I mean in an artistic way, when you disguise and discover more lyric meanings in one song (intended or unintended). I must confess it was unintended, but the lyrics of the verses, bridge and prechorus fit well to both stories ..macabre. With the music I have the problem that the chorus is sounding like a stretched prechorus while the hearer is waiting for more that won't come. Supported by the fact that it has no lyrics in it. But the outro compensates a bit. Maybe I gotta shift something. Let me know.
my first piece on Tuxguitar from last year. Back then just with an 20 year old keyboard attuned. It has a too long intro an boring drums, but I won't do anything about it, 'cos I have some other writing-plans now. I just wanted to show before it goes to the graveyard.. maybe. ;-)