I've really tried pushing the boat out with this. As songs go this is very built up and not complex (yet). But I'm trying something new so this may be an utter faliure. And just to let you guys know. The tunings on Synth 3 and 4 are fucking weird. Got part bass part guitar tunings so if they do suddenly change or end up doing so later on, that's why.
To keep the ball rolling I added a heavier riff to the song, however the transition may be an issue. I also could think of anything to put over the top of it or continue it having a black spot after writing.
I've gone back to drop G# with this. Its got a more sinister feel than most of my previous songs (Rise from the Ashes beats this so far). I do also think this is far more polished tha n my other songs as well. Don't know where the hell this is going but who cares?