One of my older songs. I've removed the "rise" section (For the guys who didn't listen to the first incarnation of this it was a more majory section which I felt didn't fit so the last chorus goes straight to the outro now. However I still want to improve this song if possible so any critique will be of great use and I do not care how harsh it is. Be genuinely honest!
So I've never uploaded on here before, and looking to hear your thoughts on my latest riffage. This is something I've been working on for a few weeks, any feedback (positive or negative) is good feedback! This is some melodic deathcore with a little bit of djent mixed in. I'm really looking to improve my songwriting, so seriously, tell me what you think dudes and or dudettes.