The song title says it all. I hope I've done good lyrics to it. A happy little accident happend while completing them: At the end the sentence "fly of this ledge like a fether" was meant to insinuate a contemplation of suicide by a broken-hearted. Just this minute I realized that it all can be turned upside down if you understand the protagonist as a murder letting someone else fall (dead or alive). That's great, I mean in an artistic way, when you disguise and discover more lyric meanings in one song (intended or unintended). I must confess it was unintended, but the lyrics of the verses, bridge and prechorus fit well to both stories ..macabre. With the music I have the problem that the chorus is sounding like a stretched prechorus while the hearer is waiting for more that won't come. Supported by the fact that it has no lyrics in it. But the outro compensates a bit. Maybe I gotta shift something. Let me know.
Updated version. I think it sounds much better. I think i fixed that start/stop issue. Plus I added another guitar and a vocal track. I switched bass to Slap Bass 2, and adjusted volumes so that you can hear the bass better right away when it starts. I think that's all of my updates.
I added an outro. I also honestly tried with the vocal track, but I got nothing. I also switched the bass out for a better sounding bass and adjusted the different volumes, chorus, and reverb levels to make the song sound as good as possible
This is a song that I wrote 3 or four years ago. I uploaded here around a year ago, but it was just a demo version for people to get the just of it. I have completely redone most of the song to make it sound alot better. However, the vocal track still could use some work.
A song i was working on recently. It has a interesting chord progression with a nice melody during the third part of the song with the overdrive guitar, and the bass has a nice line throughout the song. Somehow a different song was uploaded the first time, so this time this is the right song.