I neatened up the transition between the main change at the start by having an extended clean section with a solo in it to flow over to the thrashy section and went from there. If all went to plan, this song shouldn't last too long and should have a nice feel and flow to it. If not, more work will be done.
This is it guys. My first song in a while that is truly my style. I think it is one of my best yet. I do have one big concern though, the transition (it's labeled) troubles me and if anyone could revise it i would REALLY grateful.